About your edit, it is better now, yeah. I still am not sure, if you should write it that way, as making such judgements of why a 3rd person might react the way they react, is hard to make without being involved and knowing that person. I totally agree with what you say and would give the same advice any friend I know personally... But... I am not sure about if thats also best for IPS.
I am not saying it is bad. I am just saying I don't feel able to decide any further. Maybe wait for someone else. As I might be biased here, as said, cause I would give the very same advice.