since the original counterproposal was floated by a lass though...as to which of the noble lads would respond the angriest/nastiest to it? (although Cersei vs. my character would make for some intriguing sparks flying)
I don't know what he would do, but it would be interesting if he refused (his character's such an unknown that you could certainly get away with it :P )
@Shalvenay Don't really know, except something to do with him being mad and known for trying to burn everyone alive. Certainly sounds like the sort of person who's very capable of disagreeing :P Anyway, it's after 1am, so I'm off to bed - night!
How would you determine the upper and lower temperature limits be for a race of human-sized reptiles?
It's a fairly well-known fact at this point that reptiles are ecotherms, meaning that they require outside sources of heat to stay warm and metabolize. However, being too hot or too cold can h...
My question is doing terribly! Edited to change its meaning by an experienced member, downvoted 3 times, put on hold, no useful answers. I want to delete it, but it says that would "deprive future readers of this knowledge."
Yeah, but it says if I do that too many times I won't be allowed to ask any more questions.
I think I was hoping for too much when I asked the question. They say that it's opinion based when they put it on hold, but I don't think it is. I just think it's looking for an answer with an extensive knowledge of biology and anatomy, and that's a really hard topic to study. I see lots of great answers based in physics, but physics is just easier.
Magic is is often portrayed as something totally beyond or outside mundane life. For example, it is often expressed as an energy outside the body, something the wizard/witch can tap into but it isn't actually a part of him/herself. If it needs fuel, it's often a fictional fuel (such as invented ...
I don't really feel that. It did help. It's a better wording, overall. I'd keep most of it. I just find some parts of it troublesome, but I keep them because they were done by a very high rep member, because I trusted that person's judgement. Now that it's on hold I guess I have to stop trusting that judgement.
@sphennings Is that really something I should be concerned about for an On Hold question? Doesn't that mean the question as it stands is a bad fit for the site and should never have been asked? Why try to preserve it for existing answers when it's been blocked from getting any more answers?
Your original question has a good core but there's a lot distracting from it. Especially the many many many question marks (and associated mini questions) make it tiresome to read / detract from what you might want. JBH tried to synthesize that core but failed horribly by overdoing it with the editing in my opinion.
From my POV the best point of action would be to take a look at JBH's edit and then roll-back and try to achieve the same 'clarity' with your own words.
I really wanted a guide to biology and how it can be integrated with systems of magic. I was aiming for something too big to expect. Now I'm thinking I should boil it down to the very specific needs of the story I'm trying to write.
@sphennings Surely if it is a bad fit as it currently is, you wouldn't deny me the ability to change it just because it might mess up existing answers.
If the question is edited it will automatically added to a review queue for users with over 3k rep to determine if the question can be re-opened or not.
@Geo As a rule it is a bad idea to invalidate existing answers. It's unfair to the answeres to be penalized for not answering the question when they were answering the question as it was when they posted.
@Geo I don't know who the "high rep" user is, but they might not have been editing it to make it "fully acceptable". Looking at the edit reason, they just put "Clarity and legibility of question" which means that they were just fixing some wording, but otherwise didn't want to change the spirit of the question. Now if their edit made the question too broad or whatever then fix those parts. But that's not what looks like happened
@AndyD273 What bugs me most is how they changed the title to make it into a question about how real biology could produce magic. That's obviously impossible. I was just looking to integrate some real facts about biology into my magic system, like a good writer who had some research.
@Geo One of the reasons to reject edits from low reputation users is that it clearly conflicts with the OP's intent. If the edit conflicts with your intent then do what dot_Sp0T is saying.
5K isn't especially high rep, but for the record if @James of many names were to make an edit to one of my posts that I felt changed what I was asking I'd still roll it back
I'm not going to roll it back. I'm going to try to build upon the improvements that he made.
I don't know about protecting existing answers though. I don't like the existing answers much. I was looking for answers based in biology, but so far none of them provide any scientific knowledge of biology.
There's multiple camps on that one. My camp says: if someone answers a question before it's well-defined then it's your own damn fault if your answer is invalidated
@Geo Now to answer the question as originally asked... Have you put any thought into what actually makes magic work? Is it a will power thing? Or giving instructions that the universe has to follow? Or something else I haven't thought of?
@AndyD273 I was just about to make us some random BS about how magic works in my story, and then it struck me that a good writer would do some research and find and real existing biological system that could be worked into the explanation for magic. The problem is that I never took any biology courses in school.
@sphennings Oh, I know not to over-explain it. I don't want to put the readers to sleep. But I do think I should have a solid idea of how it works for myself and I want to be able to hint at that in the story.
@Geo There are those who have studied the biological sciences around here. Wizards who have unraveled the mysteries of life and death. Do not undertake the journey lightly as you cannot unlearn what you will see...
Like, Maybe the appendix is actually a magic organ that allows for manipulation of reality, but I wouldn't know if that is a good answer to your question. If magic is a mental force of will, it might be that spinal fluid is a better answer...
Yeah, but anyone can pick a random body part and say: here's where the magic is. The real trick is then having the knowledge of biology necessary to figure out how that affects the magic system. Like what sort of chemicals affect that part of the body and how, what weaknesses would that create for wizards, and so on.
At first I thought to use the vascular system, but then I tried to research vasodilators. It's really, really complicated! That's when I realized I might need some help.
@sphennings I'm not going to tell the readers where the magic comes from. I just need to know it for myself so I can make the story consistent and drop hints.
@sphennings It's super important for wizards to have weaknesses. They are naturally OP.
That's why I want to tie magic to some real biological system, so the magic can be affected by things which affect that biological system, like drugs and toxins.
I guess the real core of my question is: "I want wizards to have a weakness based in real biology. What biological system can I tie my magic system to so that magic can be realistically affected by some real chemicals in low doses, like something that could affect the wizard if slipped into food or on contact with skin."
Lots of things are affected by things that affect biological systems without being biological in origin. Think about driving while intoxicated or stabbed in the spleen.
@Geo Wizards are still human. They have all the weaknesses of a human.
@sphennings No, no, it's still going to be all sorts of fantastic. The whole reason I want to give wizards weaknesses is because they have crazy fantastic powers. They'd be invincible without special weaknesses. I just want to tie their weaknesses to some fact of biology.
I'm going to change the title of my question to "Weaknesses of Wizards based in Real Biology?" And edit the content of the question around that new title.
@sphennings Because having the power to do almost anything is boring unless it comes with a weakness.
@Bellerophon Really? But my current question is On Hold. It's begging to be edited. Is this too great a change? I feel like it's the spirit of my original question.
Define magic? Like, "The ability to make amazing things happen, such as conjure objects from nothing, transform things, and throw destructive blasts"? That sort of definition?
You're talking about the question of how to get magic from real biology? That's so frustrating. My original question wasn't asking about that at all! Then someone edited it.
Light and sound are electromagnetic waves of different length and frequency. Your eyes and ears are receptors that can process different wavelengths and your brain then translates this data into something you can work with (aka pictures / sound)
Thanks to being diagnosed with aspergers (a milder form of autism) I've had a chance to start thinking about what is and what is not. E.g. the definition of normal. Or perception. Etc. We adhere to common standards - these standards can be changed
@dot_Sp0T I have 28 years of constant evidence to the self consistency of the world. Statistically speaking it's highly likely that events happen when they aren't observed.
The tree falling is but an assumption. It could've always been there the way it is now. It could've just appeared before you looked around the bushes that hid it.
Well, I just gave my question a major overhaul. I replaced practically every word of it, but I feel that I preserved the original intent of the question, and the answers that it already has don't seem especially worse for the the change.
Unfortunately, even if it ever gets taken off On Hold, it'll still be a -2 question, so it will probably never get any useful answers.
@Geo sweet, though I'd change the title to better reflect that you're looking for a biologic process/system that can be influenced externally without severely affecting normal bodily processes
I actually like the Chi suggestion that a couple people put. It's something that could exist in anyone, but people who do magic are able to consciously direct it. If something happens to block the chi, like a pinched nerve, or maybe consuming some kind of a mineral, then the ability to do magic is diminished.
@AndyD273 I guess it's not bad. It's better than nothing. But it seems like Chi isn't based in anything that really exists in the body, like organs and biological systems. It's a lot like green rocks, isn't it?
@Geo Maybe. There are a lot of people that think that Chi is a real thing. Maybe it is, and it's just not something that science is able to detect yet?
@sphennings No, no, I'm looking for something that actually exists in the body. If it's going to be a mechanism inside the cell, then I want a real one, not a fictional one.
@sphennings Magic is fictional, but the mechanism that controls magic could still be real. It's just a fiction that the mechanism actually controls magic. Like if you controlled magic with your nose like in that TV show about witches. Noses are real.
Oh! Gut bacteria. What if there is a symbiotic organism that can live in the gut, and that has the side effect of creating mana. You get it from eating certain ceremonial foods. So if you eat the wrong thing the organism dies off and the wizard loses their power, and has to do the ceremony (and eat the food) again to grow it all again.
Gut bacteria can have a huge impact on your life. Get the wrong stuff and you get ulcers. Don't have enough of the right stuff any you end up with other major problems.
@sphennings It needs to be a body part that can be effected by some sort of drug or toxin to serve as a weakness for the wizard, something which wouldn't kill an ordinary person. I don't need help choosing a random body part. I need help understanding the biology of body parts and how that can fit into a story.
@AndyD273 Perhaps a better/more scientific way (in a specific example) to put it is exhale sharply at/just before the point of impact, so that there's a momentarily tension at the right place to e.g. hit harder. It's just occasionally complicated biomechanics :)
@Mithrandir24601 Could be. I'm not well versed in eastern medicine. A lot of it could just be better health through lower stress because of meditation and stuff.
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@Geo All body parts can be affected by some drug or toxin. Of course the definition of drug and toxin is dosage dependent and metrics like LD50 are designed using normal baseline humans.
And the brain is a hugely powerful organ. You can literally worry yourself sick, as in destroy your health just by the power of your brain and it's power over your body.
@sphennings I want it to be like something that could be put into the wizard's food or applied to the wizards skin, so it's a serious weakness that would serve as a real limit to the vast magical powers of a wizard. It needs to be something that doesn't require hugely large doses.
I heard a story of a lady who convinced herself that she was sick and was going to die. The doctors ran all kinds of tests, sent her to specialists, etc over several years and were never able to find a single thing wrong with her, or that would make her thing that she was dying. And then one day she just died. Coroner couldn't figure out what to write for the cause of death. So far as they could figure she just thought herself to death.
@AndyD273 Probably something in her brain. The brain is still so poorly understood. Doctors never seem to be able to cure any brain diseases.
@dot_Sp0T Wow. That's a really interesting idea! I never thought of that. It could actually work. I'll need to research exactly what alcohol does to a person.
@dot_Sp0T Clarifying? I'm just saying that a weakness to alcohol could be a great idea. It's an interesting lead, and if I do some research on the exact physiological effects of alcohol it could get even better.
@dot_Sp0T Oh, I see, so you were saying that alcohol kills enteric flora! Perhaps then a wizard that gets his power from enteric flora would be vulnerable to alcohol. Even better.
@sphennings if there are magic bacteria in your gut. But what if a gud gut is all you need for magic? No strange bacteria. Just a fact of life in this conworld.
My personal preference (after having the gut rejected) would be going for something with vitamins. Many people take vitamins without understanding why.
Natural sources are used in medicine all the time. Like Aspirin. It started out as willow bark tea, and some scientist decided to see if there was something to it.
On the other hand, Would a human male in their mid-twenties benefit from a snack about 2 hours before going to bed? Answers will be judged on their reasoning and hard data.
@Geo you asked for an example on how vitamin deficiency can influence people. I brought up a simple example that has lots of prove behind it. You could have a deficiency or too much of a Vitamin seriously affect a person's wizardy-organ.
@dot_Sp0T It's something to keep in mind, certainly, but it's hard to imagine anything preventing a wizard from eating an appropriate diet to maintain his powers.
You're looking for others to find possible physical limitations without changing the human body other than attaching an imaginary function to an organ. There are limitations, you know?
@Geo I was just thinking you could require them to have a particular osmotic balance requiring them to consume lower levels of water and higher of salt than a normal human. Deprive them of salt or give them a lot of water and their osmotic balance will normalise.
@sphennings Oh, so vitamin Pb means shooting a person with a gun.
@Bellerophon But it's a wizard. They have vast magical powers. The whole point is to try to balance that power, but how are you going to deny them salt unless you've already overcome the vast magical powers somehow?
@dot_Sp0T No, I'm looking to use a real organ so I can integrate a little biology research into my story. To give readers who understand biology a bonus as well as educating myself and others.
@Geo so, in other words, you have not thought about that. Yet you're looking for a way to limit a wizards power - though you have not defined what gives them their power over another non-wizard.
That sounds to me like doing maths without defining what a number is.
Oh no, I know what magical power is. It's throwing destructive blasts and conjuring things and transformations. The issue is just what biological system they're using to control such power. If I knew about all the systems of biology I'd probably be able to pick a good one. Maybe once I have one it will suggest how people are initiated into magic.
@Geo All you need to do is say "That's where the magic comes from" since normal people have the same organs, what you're doing is effectively saying that there is a magic version of a normal organ.
Or just say that there is the magic second kidney that is where magic comes from.
If the only difference between wizards and non-wizards is that wizards know how to use the magic in their organ then there is no physical difference between wizards and non-wizards
BUT WHY CAN THEY DO THIS AND OTHERS CAN'T?! WHY CAN WIZARDS THROW DESTRUCTIVE BLASTS AND SO ON?! AND WHY CAN'T ALBERT SMITH FROM 4TH PENNY LANE, ALBUVILLE DO SO?!
@dot_Sp0T It could be as simple as knowing how to use magic, or perhaps their organ is filled with some sort of fictional magic-stuff. I guess that depends on what organ it is.
@Geo For every organ real or fictional it could be as simple as knowing how to use magic or perhaps the real or fictitious organ is filled with some fictional magic-stuff.
There is no way to select any organ real or fictional over another.
@sphennings Of course no organ can actually cause magic to happen. The organ is just the part of the body that's relevant to how the wizard controls magic. I mean, supposing that magic were real, some part of the body would need to be used to control it.
Maybe you need to draw certain signs into the air in front of you and then something happens. Cut off someones hands and they can't make the signs anymore
@dot_Sp0T Unfortunately biology is not my world. Biology is the real world and so that takes research. If I just wanted to take the easy way then I could invent my own fictional organ and say it does whatever I like.
@Geo Kidneys are two long tubes. One of which is filled with blood and experiences high pressure forcing most stuff into the other tube. The amount of stuff in each tube then equalises except for urea and other toxins which are all kept in the second tube. The stuff in the second tube is pushed down to the bladder. That is basically everything in the kidneys.
Maybe people can see and thus manipulate the fabric of reality by injecting volatile substances into their eyes. But even then you're inventing something.
@JDługosz not a lot. Messing with rendering code. Preparing classes. Being a week late with finalizing contest rules and material for a convention this weekend