Hello guys! I don't think it's worth posting a question on StackExchange, so I'll just quickly ask if this sentence seems correct to you or not: 'That he wants to leave is a mystery even to me.' Should 'that' be replaced with 'if'? Thanks.
What about this sentence [I am scared]: 'Who wouldβve thought that a chocolate bonbonnière could be determinative in oneβs life?'
If you ask what a bonbonnière is, I would say a presentable chocolate box for a specific occasion. Is there a more (...) term for this?
Fiverr is a global online marketplace offering tasks and services, beginning at a cost of $5 per job performed, from which it gets its name. The site is primarily used by freelancers who use Fiverr to offer services to customers worldwide. Currently, Fiverr lists more than three million services on the site that range between $5 and $500.
== History ==
Fiverr was founded by Shai Wininger and Micha Kaufman in 2009. Wininger came up with the concept of a marketplace that would provide a two sided platform for people to buy and sell a variety of digital services typically offered by freelanc...
Isn't it too simple? I mean I certainly don't want to overcomplicate or be pretentious, but it needs to be admission-essay-like. When I read other essays that have worked, I see that they've used many flowery words.
The thing is we got a chocolate box. There was a classical CD inside. I was a hyperactive child. Only the tracks from that CD could calm me down. I grew up loving classical music, and eventually became a very self-contained, shy, and courteous. But until I was 9, I didn't consider playing the violin....
What I'm trying to say is: I grew up by listening to classical music, but I never thought of playing the violin. My mum suggested it because she'd learnt that it could enhance my creativity