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Where were we? Page 42. msh210's addendum to his question.
Commas, quotation marks, Hebrew. As above.
yEz's answer on that page: Add a comma into
yEz's answer continued on p. 24
Bullet points. Brackets. Square on the first bullet point, round on the fourth. Any reason for this discrepancy?
First paragraph on p. 43: add a comma after i.e.
Ariel K's answer on p. 45
Add a space after p. in p.16-18.
The first sentence of Ariel K's second paragraph interests me. Is teshuva accept so that one can change one's ways (i.e., for the reason that), or is teshuva accepted, therefore one can change one's ways?
> Sincere teshuva is always accepted, so one can always change one's ways ....
Or one -> his, which I'm told is acceptable in AmE.
If the former, as is is grammatically fine. The first time I read it, I assumed that the second meaning was intended, and that it was wrong. Only when repunctuating it did I notice the possibility of the first reading. This may be merely due to my unfamiliarity with the concept. If the first reading is intended, leave it alone.
In josh waxman's answer on p. 45, there should be a comma after Whereas. Also, there are two double hyphens which should be dashes, but I believe you've already swept them up.
And back to the glossary.
This ends with a full stop outside of quotation marks.
In the credits, instead of N/A, how about no account?
That is, then, a complete review, in that I've read the entire document. I do not pretend that it is a thorough review. It was piecemeal, and generally done in evenings and in short snatches on various lunchtimes.
The following is a proposal. Please edit as you see fit or post critiques or alternative schedules as answers.
This schedule assumes, tentatively, that a print run and distribution will take place.
Complete Wednesday, July 1: Post request for links
Complete Due Wednesday, July 1: Post solicita...
