@SohaFarhinPine did you end up getting the help you needed?

@Chappo Unfortunately, no.

Do you still need help? @SohaFarhinPine

@Chappo I do, but not really enthusiastic about it.

It's not my best work, you see.

That piece is horrendous

not prepared for the soul-crushing comments that will definitely come my way

@SohaFarhinPine If it was your best work, a review might not be necessary ;-) - I might have some time later today (Sunday) if you'd like a non-crushing review. Is it a school assignment, or personal creativity? Do you need copy-editing (fixing grammar, punctuation, syntax, clarity), or help with content (overall structure, style, etc)?