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Q: Is it better to make clear immediately in which country/continent the story is taking place?

alexchencoI'm writing a short story, and nowhere in it I explicitly mention the country in which it is taking place. The only time I mention something about the country is when I refer to a historical event that happened there. The country has nothing to do with the story. It's just that I have the habit ...

 
 
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2:25 PM
what is wrong with this sentence?
Although many Whites, noting the presence of some Blacks in the middle class, think that the time for enforcing civil rights measures is past, Blacks generally are aware of figures for average income and unemployment showing as wide a radical discrepancy as ever.
 

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