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Anuj Kaithwas
02:13
hi
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Anuj Kaithwas
13:16
hello
so i made this, i know a lot's missing
Bakabaka
@AnujKaithwas what's it for?
as in, what is the application of the gfx?
Anuj Kaithwas
I just want to know what's needed more. I am trying colors for the hill things, and the walls of the palace
no application, practicing it :)
Bakabaka
phew, that's a toughie
hehe -- more a bug than critique: you mirrored the outer towers, but with that, the shadows got flipped as well.
so the right tower's shadow is the wrong way round
Anuj Kaithwas
oh damn!
hehe sorry :|
Bakabaka
13:31
besides that... I think it's a bit flat, but that may just be the style
then again, I'm not that much of an illustrator myself (more a designer), so I don't know whether you want to listen to my advice :P
Anuj Kaithwas
yeah, i made it flat style
but it contradicts, it since the back has a gradient
Bakabaka
indeed -- if you go flat, go all-out
Anuj Kaithwas
and i tried with a flat background, but it looks weird
Bakabaka
you can still add flat nuance in a flat background -- just don't use a gradient. Use shapes of slightly different blues
Anuj Kaithwas
actually it's those clouds that might be taking off the appeal
okay, i will do that
total flat is better :)
what do you think about the palace?
i will just make the top of the outer tower hollow, so that the sky is visible, like those besides the dome
Bakabaka
13:41
it's... elaborate :)
Anuj Kaithwas
that's good?
Bakabaka
if that's what you're going for, yes )
Anuj Kaithwas
no, i mean, does it look good to your eyes?
:D
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