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Not quite right. You did not address the crossed term.
$Y=(X_1+2X_2+X_3)^2=X_1^2+4X_2^2+X_3^2+4X_1X_2+2X_1X_3+4X_2X_3$
Hence,by independenc and linearity of expectation
$E[Y] = E[X_1^2]+4E[X_2^2]+E[X_3^2]+4E[X_1]E[X_2]+2E[X_1]E[X_3]+4E[X_2]E[X_3]$
Now, you can evaluate the individual terms.
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