In the top two panels, I can't read the comments. I think it would be conceptually easier to show Billy in front of his computer monitor, with the comments on it, then in the second frame, same thing but with the message blocking out the comments.
Also, in the fourth frame, I would drop the "It doesn't matter" part and just skip to the "How many reps do you have?"
Hmm ... there's a lotta folks around who write pretty well. Why would they want to post on the blog instead of in the Q&A? he said rhetorically. Obviously, because they're not limited by an inferior question, or by such constraints as get a question closed. So perhaps something building on freedom of expression or get it off your chest or don't wait to be asked . . .
I've got a little free time if you want me to try to mock up one of these
I don't know if you had ideas for color schemes/fonts/whatever
We should have a post on closing as Gen Ref. What does it mean, why do we have it, how can you fix the question (explaining research and what you don't understand, etc.) The deadline is 6 weeks.
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That's terrific. I hope it moves ELL off the scheid it seemed to be stuck on. As Dr. Johnson said, "Depend upon it, Sir, when a man knows he is to be hanged in a fortnight, it concentrates his mind wonderfully."
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There were a lot of intriguing arguments throughout. I ...
