I'm currently proposing this sort of change to the first few paragraphs:
The year is 2067. After a successful manned trip to Mars and back in year 2037 we discovered an alien message guiding us to an alien planet. NASA, ESA (European Space Agency), Russian Space agency, China, and Japan put together scientists and a lot of money to [make the warp drive possible][4] because we want to visit the planet.
**Edit: Warp drive:** I think that the NASA Concept...