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The link below is a rudimentary attempt at simple passages or notes that I personally relate to.
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IIRC we have a few native Polish speakers on Lit (emerging in response to a question of Hamlet's about Stanislaw Lem), at least one of them (Yasskier?) fairly high-rep and not just a one-post user.
In section 9 of S. Y. Agnon's short story "The Kerchief", the narrator / protagonist gives us the scene at the Shabbat lunch meal:
When I came back with Father from the small prayer room she was already seated at the table wearing her kerchief, and the table was prepared with wine and cakes, lar...