THAT'S A LOT OF WORDS

SH*T

Yea if it’s hard to read ill see about putting it into a google doc later

Oof,

it's really good so far, I like how the city was described as a haven

Also the description of Karinea

On point (snapping fingers and proceeds to add finger guns)

Lol i dont think pages has a weblink like google docs but if you guys want i can send what i have in some way

e-mail works for me

I'm engrossed :D

it's aspen.otaku@gmail.com

XD thanks sudo if that was pointed at me! And ill send it later xD walking to my car just got off work

bless

Haha sorry, yes it was!

Since you write romance, how was my bedroom scene?

**captivatin

I think the love and devotion really gets across, and I liked how tender it was

I wish I had someone to love me like that

Yas! That’s exactly what i wanted. Dont we all Christmas lol

Yeah - I'm a lonely ass potato

I just got myself out of a toxic relationship with a narcissist. So spending me time!

Ew, what the hell'd she do?

Heh mental abuse threatened to hit me, financial abuse. Cheated on me. Basically everything.

disgusting

Oh dear

It’s been a few months so i am okay now!

Gee, I hope

that's good. It can be pretty tough getting back to normal after something like that

All i know is that it a woman uses her past to excuse her bad behavior from now on I’m running.

yes do that

I've only been in like - two committed relationships in my life, both ended in them breaking up with me. :(

I had a relationship like that too and it's just a living nightmare

People need to get some sense into their heads

sorry sudo ;(

gtg

See ya bud

see ya!

Are you doing okay now sudo?

Yeah I'm good now, it was a couple years ago and I learned a lot

Awesome!!! So when do you post your chapter xD

I understand your emotional exhaustion now tho....

hmmmmmm

I don't have anything rn and it's pretty much bedtime :P But I'll see if I can dig something out

for another time lol

Yay lol where are you from again?

Ireland

Oooo has to be whar 1 am?

12.30

I am a night owl :D

Ah you are gmt?

Yep

Lol me too

You on the night shift?

I am in western usa in az so it’s 5:30 pm here

oh sorry I took your 'me too' as 'me too on gmt' haha

Ohh i figured lol that’s why i had written above half way done when you asked about my woRk lol.

Slight lag when using this room on a cell phone

Well i need to go myself. I will chat with you later!

I'll have to read the rest of your stuff later but I like it so far! Don't know much about worldbuilding but the first few paragraphs describing the city did a really good job of it... orcs are an interesting main race

I'm going too, see ya!

@CHRISTMASSTARTSONNOVEMBER1 Can you send me your email? I'm a young writer as well, 19 years old.

aspen.otaku@gmail.com

icloud.com/pages/0Qo4TYjz8p8FV1el5rolMY2nQ#Rise_of_the_Orcs-The_Dra‌​gonborn-_First_Draft

try that link

@ggiaquin Blocked on my computer

@Hanilucas aspen.otaku@gmail.com

blocked?

yeah, my administrator blocked the majority of the websites known to man

@ggiaquin try google docs

@CHRISTMASSTARTSONNOVEMBER1

docs.google.com/document/d/…

@ggiaquin oof, thanks famio. I'll read it during my lunch break

Google docs is nice in that it creates the chapters for you. Pages does not do that... hopefully it will auto do it soon. You can do it pages, but you have to do it manually.

I can only use docs, it's the only free thing on my computer that isn't blocked

I feel kind of bad, I have over 30 thousand words written, but my plot sucks XD

xD yea I need to start writing mroe. Maybe I will start here in a min

That'd be cool. I'm (as I may have mentioned before) re-writing mt entire second chapter because it's absolute trash. XD

Something reminded me of this book I read in the 8th grade called Orcs, and basically it was pron, but orcs. It was fu*cking disgustind

*porn

who was it by? I know a book called Orcs but it wasn't porn

I don't remember, but just think... in a junior high library.....

well it can't be that bad if it was allowed by the school

THERE WERE FULL ON SEX SCENES IN THERE. NO CENSORS OR ANYTHING

JEEEEESUS

so does game of thrones and stuff lol

That wasn't allowed in school until highschool

But still..... I was scarred for life. I can no longer look at a unicorn the same again....

o.o

it was that bad

play.google.com/store/books/…

that book?

YES

lol i have read it... it's not that bad

How old were you when you read it?

BECAUSE I WAS 14

lol at 14 they have already given you like 3 sex ed classes

yeah, but none of them were How To: Fuck a bitch

\excuse my french

it's just part of the culture

there is much worse content in rap songs

i didn't find anything too crazy though in that story.

I only listen to techno and christian rock

Too crazy.... The first 5 chapters were 50 shades of ORC PUSSY

like, can y'all not?

meh to each their own.

**oof, I had class..

lol i would rather have that than an hour of physical therapy

Rip

4 shots in my back plus bone manipulation

kaljrsdgh lkjsdfn lkjf

Thinking i might finish writing stuff in google docs, I love pages, it's basically thes ame thing but I do like the auto outline aspect. They don't have my chosen font though :/

Bummer, You can download fonts though

good lord work needs to end. 1 hour to go and I am falling asleep on my face.

Just keep swimming Just keep swimming Just keep swimming swimming swimmmming

I have 10 minutes left of School and then I'm home free. But I'm like already 100% brain dead

oof I'm leaving son Peace