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Q: Should I improve this edit?

AnteDeumI want to respectfully ask your opinion about my first edit, and why this edit wasn't approved or on what should be improved. I am not the best in english, but it hurt my eyes seeing english wrote like that. I don't know if this is the proper place to ask to begin with, but for know I hope its ...

 

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