@Sarah FYI I fully agree with this edit - good call

@JonEricson, I have attempted to encourage rhetorician through comments on this post to focus on the text and question, and keep answers to well supported facts. I told him I attempted a radical edit that he could roll back, but I thought he could do even better by a focused answer. He responded well and is expecting the edit. Just wanted you to know what I was up to as we cleared the comments.