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Q: Are my metaphors/similes effective?

alexchencoI'm editing a short story I wrote I while ago, and the first thing I wanted to do was to add similes/metaphors to it. Here's some sample text: Ruth laughed. "Sometimes I really wonder whether you are living in the same city as the rest of us." "Yeah," Erin said with a half smile. "I w...

 
 
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1:25 PM
@NathanC.Tresch It's Tuesday at 13:00 local time, so four hours from now.
You can look at the room info; it's under the schedule tab.
 
 
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2:47 PM
Can't take the drudgery.
 
 
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4:44 PM
Hello everyone!
 
@KitFox - Are you around today?
@cornbreadninja麵包忍者 - Howdy!
 
@NeilFein Yes.
 
@KitFox - How's it going? Haven't seen you around much.
 
It's going.
I've had better times, but not by much.
So what are you working on these days?
 
5:13 PM
hello
 
Hiya.
 
how's your sex cake?
 
5:30 PM
@KitFox That's really hot and creepy and disturbing all at the same time.
 
Oh. Thanks.
I used a lot of erotic trigger words in a cake context.
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I'm reminded (because I'm a Star Trek addict) of this: trektoday.com/content/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/…
 
heeheehee
 
5:57 PM
I'm suddenly craving me some cake.
 
Everybody loves cake.
 
6:26 PM
Three chapters edited today. I am an editing machine! Yay me!
 
Yay, you!
 
6:44 PM
The asmr is making my head hurt.
I guess I should try working again.
 
 
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8:48 PM
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Q: think, I think, I don't think

T2EI use "think", "I think" and "I don't think" in my writing a lot. Can you suggest me few ways reduce it and few alternative ways od saying the same thing. Look below few sentences I wrote. These are just few examples, I use them a lot. Average two or three "think" in one page. Why do you...

 

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