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Q: When to be specific and when to let context fill in the holes?

Alexandro ChenSome examples: Half-crouching, I went over to the railing and pointed my flashlight down (to the ground). It was approximately a two-storey fall. Not incredibly high, but high enough to kill a person. Cath covered her nose (with her hand). “Damn. That stinks." Is the bold tex...

 
 
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8:19 AM
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Q: Tools for multiple creators/writers documentation without clouds

Thomas E.In many companies I've seen it that more than 1 person are writing at the same documentation (be it user manual or technical documentation) for a computer application. What I have seen in usage was mostly svn in combination with windows word. This combination never worked out quite well and was ...

 
 
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2:42 PM
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Q: Making questions appropriately broad

Paul A. ClaytonThe recent question "Is it OK to invent as I write, or should I plan the entire story first?" seems very closely related to "How much planning should go on before beginning writing?". Since the answer to the more recent one and the answers to the older one do not overlap, I do not think these are...

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Q: How should Writers encourage broad (but not too broad) answers?

Paul A. ClaytonOne difficulty for the Writers Stack Exchange is that writing questions tend to be more subjective (requiring greater length for a good answer) and often address a specific problem the asker has (leaning toward being "too localized", which is part of the discussion in "Critiques considered harmfu...

 
 
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4:55 PM
Waves
 
does the wave
 
waves back
and forth
 
holy double entendres in a title batman
So how is everyone today? ready to write?
 
5:11 PM
I just got word that Kit is busy but may be joining us later.
 
Ok.
Are we waiting then?
 
I'll be around for the next hour or so, I think.
 
We don't need to wait. Latecomers can just catch up.
 
Ok. Shall we choose a topic then?
 
@Arrowfar @MattЭллен We are starting the chat without yous!
@Aaron Sure
Got any suggestions?
 
5:22 PM
Rescue Reward? Used a random word generator and got those two.
 
alright.
10 minutes?
 
Yup
 
ok ready, set, go!
 
5:35 PM
My 10 are up.
link^
 
I guess I'm done, too?
 
@NeilFein Did you start a timer?
 
@Aaron No, I just figured if @Aaron is done I'm done too.
Let's just call that ten minutes.
Timestamps on the chat messages say that was 12 minutes. Shrug
 
I had to pause in the middle cause I was interrupted.
@NeilFein Very good.
 
@Aaron Yours too.
 
I missed last weeks. I see the topic was cheese crackers.
 
Did anyone else write for that?
BRB
 
I think matt came in late so he might be
 
user116848
Hello! All
 
user116848
hi
 
5:45 PM
Hello.
 
Thanks.
This is a good exercise.
 
yeah we often get some good submissions
I'm not super satisfied with mine. I wanted the protagonist to get trapped and need rescuing, but I ran out of time trying to figure out how that would happen, and so decided to do it the easy way.
 
I didn't get to finish mine either. I was going to have the kid wind up being a demon and giving the man a "Gift" for rescuing him
 
yeah that seemed like the direction it was going in. I'm torn between thinking it needs more, or thinking it's good enough the way you have it.
 
5:52 PM
I notice my writing is, well I wouldn't call it dark but not very happy ending oriented even though I am an optimistic person normally.
 
that's normal. My writing is full of adventures even though I'm a very boring person normally.
 
user116848
I can't think of anything to write on Rescue Reward
 
user116848
Seems like a good topic though
 
@Arrowfar - You're thinking? That's not part of the exercise. I just opened up BBEdit and started typing whatever &*#@ came into my head.
 
user116848
Is it like a bounty? Because rescuers don't get paid anything
 
5:57 PM
:D
 
user116848
okay...
 
user116848
I am setting up my Wordpress.....:D
 
I notice I have an issue though. I try to stick to the third person but get sentences like this that sound odd "He placed him down carefully on the forest floor" the "He placed him" Part seems like I could phrase it better. Should I always use a descriptor like "He placed the kid" Or is it ok as is?
 
@Aaron It's fine, to me.
He placed him: in that case him can't refer to the same person as he.
you'd say "he placed himself"
But you could also give your characters names.
 
I suck a names. I usually type things like "B" or whatever while writing and then do a find/replace later.
 
6:03 PM
Yea. I am bad at names as well. I also am a fan of nameless characters in short stories.
 
yeah I was just re-reading an old writing exercise and noticed that I have a lot of characters named Martin.
I don't even know any martins.
 
Lol. Maybe you want to know a Martin?
 
Oh! I just realized, I have a neighbour named Martin. But I only learned his name a few weeks ago.
 
user116848
 
user116848
I timed myself and couldn't write much!
 
user116848
6:10 PM
This is all I could write :D
 
user116848
@NeilFein I wrote it
 
user116848
It is a fiction not a fact.
 
@Arrowfar You have a few sentences where you don't have agreement in number between the subject and the verb.
 
user116848
Like?
 
> a team of mountaineers who was stuck in the snow and storm during their attempt
 
user116848
6:15 PM
I'd love a feedback on my grammar etc.
 
user116848
*were
 
Where is Kit?
 
user116848
Yes. typo hehe
 
There are some other examples.
 
user116848
6:16 PM
Yes?
 
@WillHunting Working. She may be in later.
 
@Mr.ShinyandNew安宇 So you think Canada is a better place to live in than US? I have not decided which to go study in yet, lol.
 
@Arrowfar okay my mistake the second one is fine. But I did notice some "They" instead of "The"
 
user116848
Oh, yes. Thanks!
 
user116848
I notice it too :-)
 
6:18 PM
Also "they reached to the higher altitude" I think should be "they reached the higher altitude". If you reach something you arrive. If you reach to it it means you strive in that direction.
 
user116848
I see
 
@WillHunting Yes, of course I do! But many Americans would differ.
@WillHunting are you going to do the exercise today?
 
@Mr.ShinyandNew安宇 Maybe.
 
user116848
@Mr.ShinyandNew安宇 So, I'll edit it now. Only the grammar parts. Is that okay?
 
6:20 PM
@Arrowfar It's your post. you can do what you want with it. But I figured since we're here, we may as well hand out constructive criticism.
 
user116848
Yes, definitely! Thanks!
 
Would anyone want to do an exercise where we take these and turn them into actual stories? Maybe no more than, say, 2500 words? We could do this in time for next week.
 
Hmm, I think I won't do the writings on Tuesdays anymore, I will just come here to chat, lol.
 
@NeilFein So write the 10 minute story but then expand it into a larger story?
 
@Aaron - Yeah, or pick an older one and expand that. It doesn't have to be connected to this week.
I tried doing that with an exercise from a few months back and I stalled.
 
6:26 PM
Oh yeah, I forgot to say in this room that everyone must watch the movie If I stay, it is too good!
 
I have several stalled short stories based on the exercises here. We had a three-part exercise a few years back and I am still agonizing over the third part.
But I'm game for an expanded story exercise. My "last candle" storyline could use a resolution.
 
@Mr.ShinyandNew安宇 Cool.
 
user116848
@NeilFein By 'stall' you mean you can't expand it further?
 
Yeah.
Anyone else game?
 
@MattЭллен calling @MattЭллен
 
6:28 PM
You don't have to have a finished draft, just expand it into something with a plot or characters or, ideally, both.
 
user116848
@NeilFein It would be great to expand them. But can you give me any pointers on how to expand them?
 
hi!
I'm here
 
Hello!
Start writing... now!
 
we're discussing homework
 
6:29 PM
"Rescue Reward" is the topic.
 
thanks
 
It is 2:29 EST.
evil laugh
 
Also you should get on board with expanding an old exercise into a story
 
user116848
@NeilFein Like should we add dialogues or more twists? to expand them
 
I'll join the conversaion in about ten minutes :D
 
6:30 PM
@Arrowfar Like, your exercise today, as an example. It is a fairly bare overview of the facts of the situation.
 
I think I'll take mine and expand it into an actual plot, and try to have some character development for the viewpoint person.
So... something like that.
 
user116848
I see
 
You could describe the scene as it happened from the point of view of one of the trapped climbers, or the rescuers.
 
Should we make this a character/story thing or is that too vague?
 
Add in some drama
 
6:31 PM
I can invent some guidelines out of whole cloth if that would help. I do it all the time for writers on my blog. :D
 
@NeilFein we can add in any goals we want but I'm not sure I can commit to meeting them :)
 
user116848
@Mr.ShinyandNew安宇 okay. Cool.
 
So let's leave it at this.
I'm gonna aim for 2500 words or so, personally.
 
user116848
@NeilFein So, no time limit on that? We can just write it and paste it here?
 
@Arrowfar Just as an example. You could do something entirely different. Maybe the climbers getting stuck turns out to be because of an avalanche caused by a secret government experiment gone wrong and that story just sets the scene, showing the government's reckless disregard for human life.
 
6:32 PM
Sure!
 
@Arrowfar The time limit is one week.
 
@Mr.ShinyandNew安宇 nods Basically have it ready for the next chat.
 
user116848
Great! I'll see if I can think of anything good to write until next time :)
 
rescue reward the names were a bit all over the shop
 
6:42 PM
I made a meta thread for what the current exercise is and "homework". Dunno if this is gonna take off or not, but let's give it the old college try.
 
@MattЭллен Is "all over the shop" an idiom?
 
@Mr.ShinyandNew安宇 oh, yeah. let me get a good defn :D
 
Seems like the same as "all over the place"?
Just never encountered it before.
 
oh! right, it means "All over the place"
in a state of disorder
 
Must be a br thing
 
6:49 PM
yeah
 
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Q: Current chatroom writing exercises and homework

Neil FeinEvery Tuesday, there's a chat session where someone poses a topic and we have 10 minutes to freewrite on it. We're going to try making this a little more ambitious, and assign "homework" in-between the chat sessions. Answers below will contain what the exercise was and what the assigned homewor...

 
user116848
@MattЭллен I starred it! :D
 
thanks!
 

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