I've been researching about readability and natural writing in the past few days. I've posted some of my questions here and explained them using various sample paragraphs. I'm not soliciting proofreading comments. The paragraph below is not a part of any article for publication. This sample para...

I'm sure you don't remember me. Asked quiet a few questions a year ago. Never came back for round 2. Was working on your advices. Writing. I'm nearing the climax of my novel. There's a scene. Sort of a revelation where a character and the MC talk and the backstory is given to the reader about h...