« first day (3328 days earlier)      last day (165 days later) » 

4:12 AM
0
Q: What is a poetic translation of this could be?

JamaisVuI have been editing subtitles for a while and the Evangelion subtitles are off the chart most of the time. The translation doesn't carry the weight. For example the Japanese sentence below is short and poetic, but the English really don't catch it, especially the poetic part. Since I don't speak ...

 

« first day (3328 days earlier)      last day (165 days later) »