Trying to flesh out the form for a painting of a bust sculpture... @JohnB You still online?

somewhat

floating around

lol

this is an extremely rough sketch but I'm trying to construct it out of nothing...so many things look off but maybe you could tell me what to improve?

the right looks very off but ive been revising it for too long im not sure what to edit anymore

there will be a plinth painted beneath the bust lol

well I am probably the last person to ask

or maybe the first person, cause it looks good to me :D

way better than I can do

go on! be as critical as you like!

this is only a rough...i need to get the form looking ok before i can do the real thing

no really, I wouldn't know where to begin. I just to pre-press stuff, I'm not very creatively oriented

ah ur too kind :P

All I see is a very well done sketch, nothing sticks out as needing improvement. So it passes the idiot test

lol thanks...im not happy with the folds under the arm...they look a bit clunky. my spatial awareness is a little out of practice

@johnp that looks amazing! :D

@Vincent thanks! I've fixed it a little since- i'll upload the next rough when I get a chance and see if I can improve it more

fabric folds can be a nightmare to create from scratch

@johnp I imagine! fabric expression looks like helluva job to me D:

i actually bought a book on it xD it's in the mail. until then it's trial and error

the fabric looks really good!

It gets a little complicated as I have to draw a sculpture of fabric :3

well it looks like your doing alright to me :)

One of the pins from my moodboard

looks tricky to create something like that...I'm gunna try playing around with scanlines and liquify

Yeh not sure how id go about doing that, its a nice effect though