@MonicaCellio I've submitted a draft- let me know if there is anything there is to improve upon, anything you'd like to see.

@PipperChip nice! The videos add a lot, too. (I haven't watched all of them yet, but the ones I've watched did.) You mentioned the pointy shields at the beginning and said you'd come back to them, but it's only by implication -- you might consider closing by talking about shields being weapons too. (Were shields as blunt weapons -- shield bashes -- a thing, or is that just movies?)

@MonicaCellio Good point. I've entirely forgotten about JUDICIAL DUEL SHIELDS!

@PipperChip is that what those are? Huh. I hadn't seen those before but assumed it was more likely to be a tool of a street-fighter. (Portable and nasty!)