I'm reading H-MY? right now. Since i don't know that i'll want to proofread 50 pages later, i'll just point out some errors that i come across.

Page 10 there's some funny stuff going on with the spacing around the Hebrew in Alex's answer. זכר has two before and none after.

Page 19 includes א-לוהים without the dash (i.e. Sheimot)