Dear Zanna, I edited a message two times, but you rejected two times. You stated that changes to the content are unnecessary. But I didn't change the content. I improved grammar, statement and made button statements look easier.
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Dear @Zanna, I edited a message two times, but you rejected two times. You stated that changes to the content are unnecessary. But I didn't change the content. I improved grammar, statement and made button statements look easier.
> The edit does not improve the quality of the post. Changes to the content are unnecessary or make the post more confusing.
Looking at the original question: askubuntu.com/questions/546669/… I would say, while your edit is grammatically a step forward, altogether, I for one find that the original wording of the question — however imperfect — is easy enough to understand, if not easier than your suggestion.
On a second thought, several of the added "the" articles seem to be pretty unnecessary. "the ctrl+c option does not work" vs "ctrl+c does not work"; "the Ubuntu 12.04" vs "Ubuntu 12.04" — both are better without "the".
@SalimAzak Zanna is offline now. She will mostly come online after couple of hours. Hopefully she will clarify the reason for rejection of the suggested edit.
