i ended up missing the first week, so i was able to jump in the second week, and had an idea to bring it all together in the end, so the third was just tieing up everything (at least in my brain)
"In the 8/28/2012 chat, we will write some microfiction during the chat session for fun and practice! Bring ideas, and a link to your blog or favorite pastebin so you can share your stuff!
@KitFox yes. kinda wanted to make it where you filled in the spot with what you thought, and then challenge what you thought later on by telling you (indirectly) they're a gay couple.
it probably all works better in my head than how i wrote it, i woulnd't be surprised
@ΜετάEd Yeah, well, it was just a vibrator, but it was while we were moving stuff out of her bedroom to renovate it. She claimed it was "you know, a massager..." I spoke not a word of it.
@MattЭллен I haven't finished yet, but the first part reads much better.
@DForck42 There is no failing in writing. You've explored something. I think you could improve it if you had a better understanding of your subject matter.
@MattЭллен Oh yes, I see a lot of improvement in the flow of the narrative. The conversation seems much more American too. And I really felt the confusion tactic that Molly was using.
You still have "on holiday" though. That's very unAmerican.
@NathanC.Tresch right, the Box story Kit's referring to is me exploring my subconscious and it relates how I was feeling about the relationship I was in at the time.
@NathanC.Tresch I like yours. I got a bit confused towards the end as I couldn't tell who was talking at points. Seems like the beginnings of a good detective story.
Yes, of course, but if there is one I'll probably try to do it too ... In fact once my blog is in order I suspect I'll want to play with it. It's far shinier than my wordpress blog was.
I'm trying to decide if I want my logo to be smaller, or my title to be bigger, I mean on my blog. Obviously the title hanging out up there with the logo pushing the header down looks silly
The Tuesday afternoon chat was going well, and we agreed amongst ourselves to have an informal writing exercise every week. Chatters are free to participate or not, and to ask for critique or not.
The criteria for the exercise are posted and pinned in the chat room. Chatters are encouraged to ...
Even from behind, I sensed he was nervous. He walked quickly down the crowded sidewalk, with his coat shrugged high up and his head down. Good, I thought. You can push them out of the way tonight, and I'll follow. Nobody looks out for anybody, and the crowd tires me out. I trailed him easily, all the way to 36th Street and down the subway stairs. Maybe somebody was looking out for me after all. He was still with me at the platform, elbowing his way to the front. When we reached the ledge, he didn't stop. He hopped down onto
The Tuesday afternoon chat was going well, and we agreed amongst ourselves to have an informal writing exercise every week. Chatters are free to participate or not, and to ask for critique or not.
The criteria for the exercise are posted and pinned in the chat room. Chatters are encouraged to ...
The Overlook Hotel
The Overlook Hotel