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4:42 AM
@Neil Frein I see. Maybe humans are generalists by nature, not specialists.
 
 
11 hours later…
3:41 PM
@nathan Hello!
 
3:51 PM
Monday
@NeilFein I'm working again
And so I feel up to chatting, heh.
 
Hi @Nathan.
 
Hi @KitFox :)
 
Long time no see.
 
Yeah
I think I made an error in not coming here while my self esteem was so poor.
The last thing I want to do is write when I feel low ... And second to that is cook. Shame, because those are two of the ways that I end up feeling better. It's like a self exacerbating cycle that I don't like.
But, I just bought a brand new car and I got a brand new job that seems to be working out
As sad as this is, I suspect the car will do the most for my self esteem long erm
Term
 
4:36 PM
@Nathan So what else is new?
Have you been writing?
I mean, now that you are feeling better.
 
 
3 hours later…
7:31 PM
hey people
im having trouble with a simple little sentence
It basically says "He gave a wheezing laugh."
but i hate that sentence, and i can't find a better way to phrase it...
 
Hmm.
What do you hate about it?
 
idk
i dont like "giving a laugh"
its a taxi driver, a sort of rotund and very talkative cabbie
if that helps, lol
to form the picture.
 
He laughed wheezily?
 
hahaha
nonono
 
He wheezed from laughter.
 
7:36 PM
LOL
definitely not.
 
Wheezing wouldn't be a chuckle, snort, or guffaw.
thinks
 
heres some context:
"Eh?" He eyes the shadows suspiciously. "You're asking for my opinion here? On all that?"

"If you have one, sir."

He gives a wheezing laugh. "Oh, you got the right guy. I got enough opinions to fill a zoo."
 
Snicker maybe.
 
I give up, I can't italicize it.
 
Snicker would give it the rolling eyes feel.
I think it would fit.
 
7:39 PM
idk, snicker has a kind of derisive connotation to me
I would snicker if a fat man fell down.
 
It is derisive.
 
on some stairs.
yeah, he's not really being derisive
 
Oh.
So a good-natured chuckle then?
 
much closer to that, yes
im just trying to bring out the wheeze.
trying to paint a good picture of your average 60-year-old white NYC cab driver who won't shut up
guffaw...
 
He wheezed, chuckling "Oh, you got the right guy. I got enough opinions to fill a zoo."
Guffaw doesn't fit. You can't talk in a guffaw.
 
7:41 PM
haha
 
At least, not that many words.
 
he guffaws, then talks.
:)
 
OK, but guffawing doesn't really have a wheeze to it.
 
true
 
It fits, though.
 
7:43 PM
but it does sound like your older-person-in-bad-health style of laugh
older men guffaw
 
Myah, I guess so.
I think of teenagers as guffawers.
 
really?
 
I dunno.
 
weird!
complete opposite of my mental connotation
which i can't really justify
 
 
3 hours later…
10:48 PM
His wheezing chuckle made me think he might smoke too much.
@KitFox, I'm just getting my blog set back up
I took it down to do some thinking about what I wanted it to look like, and what I wanted it to feel like. It wasn't really me before... The writing was, but the look and feel wasn't. I have some custom graphics now and I know what I want it to be, and I'm up to doing it.
Guffaw is a dated, tired word, I'm sorry to say. I'd only use it if I were using my Howard Phillip voice.
 

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