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"Also, please note that it's inappropriate to issue demands to academic staff regarding how we conduct our teaching work." --> Interesting take here on a consumer (student pays)/provider (gets paid) relationship. We're all adults here - yes some are fresh now ones, yet their votes, prof and my vote all count the same on election day.
I get it that the prof is busy (but that is not the student's fault), yet the Prof's feedback loop does sound a tad long. Prof would not likely accept a student's I'm busy so my report will be late announcement. Yes, we should be courteous too.
". Please let me know promptly about the feedback on my first essay, ..." certainly sounds like a request and not a demand.
Yes a tad curt, but not in a demanding voice.