Looking at your question I see a couple of issues.
The first is that you start with what sounds like a spammy sales pitch. If you are quoting someone, that's perfect, because it helps show notability. Just say who and include a link.
For example, the copy sounds similar to this: http://gonw.about.com/od/fooddrink/a/copperriver.htm among other sites, which makes me think it probably originally came from a press-release.
